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Christmas poem

Post  amandawoo on Tue Dec 30, 2008 10:18 pm

Christmas Tree

It graces the room,
Resplendent and majestic
Voluptuous, vivacious
Its presence brings delight.

Baubles adorn every branch,
Like glistening, shiny fruit
Of gold and silver.

There are tasty treats to unwrap
Crackers to pull
And bright red bows which
Dance around like smiles.

Pretty parcels compete at the foot
Disguised shapes
Veiling their secrets
In Paper and boxes
Fastened with ribbons.

At twilight, more beauty is discovered
Lots of little lights peek out
Twinkle and cast shadows
Creating a sense of magic
For children everywhere.

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Re: Christmas poem

Post  liane.klingbeil@bathspa.o on Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:24 pm

Really enjoyed reading this I thought your descriptions were fantastic Very Happy

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Re: Christmas poem

Post  Fi on Mon Jan 05, 2009 9:44 pm

I loved the way you captured the feeling of excitment and magic about Christmas.

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